Audience and industry essay - feedback and learner response

 


1) Copy and paste your feedback from the email in full - WWW, EBI and LR.
WWW:Wow!This is such a detailed essay with so much effort to include media terminology accurately.I'm so impressed!

EBI: Your written English and expression is sometimes too informal (chatty) so proof read for sense and accuracy of spelling and grammar.You could add a bit more fake news part with clear example(e.g the US election)

2) What was the word count for your essay?
My word count for my essay is 851 words.

3) What was your strongest paragraph? Why do you think it was better than others?
I think my strongest paragraph is 'The changes of the the film and TV industry' because of how detailed it is and the amount of words I put into it. 

4) What was your weakest paragraph? Why do you think it wasn't as good as others?
I think my first paragraph because I didn't use that much media terms into that first paragraphs.

5) How can you improve your extended writing in GCSE Media Studies in future?
By trying too use more media terms and by checking for grammar mistakes.

6) Write ONE thing you have learned about the internet, audience and industry from completing this essay.

Internet:You can subscribe too a person you like and when a notification comes you can watch the persons video without having a hassle to find the person's next video.

Audience: Audience became less passive when the internet came out.

Industry:That there are consumers that read everything e.g newspapers and magazines.

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