December assessment - feedback and learner response

 1) First, copy down the teacher's comments from your paper. Next, did you succeed in meeting or exceeding your target grade for GCSE Media? If not, how many additional marks do you need to achieve your target grade in this paper? Write this in a full answer.

WWW- Your written English (SPAG) has improved and you are using examples from the CSPs.

EBI- Your evidence is too general and you need to give detailed examples. You need to use more subject specific media terms and revise key theories.

My target grade is 6.

My mark for this paper was 3.

To achieve my target grade of a 6,I would need to get 9 more marks.

We don't know exactly what grade boundaries AQA will set in the real exams. These are the boundaries we've used (out of 40) 

7 = 32; 6 = 28; 5 = 24; 4 = 20; 3 = 16; 2 = 12; 1 = 8, u = below 8.

Now read through the mark scheme, question by question. 

2) Write a question-by-question analysis of your performance. For each question, write how many marks you got from the number available and identify any points that you missed by carefully studying the 'possible content' part of the mark scheme:

Q1-2/2

Q2-2/2

Q3-5/8

Additional points:I need too look at what convergence is because I wrote the the word in the wrong convergence. Convergence is when everything comes together.

Q4-3/4

 Additional points: I need to go back and look at theory and be specific about it next time.

Q5-7/20

Additional points: I need to be careful next time talking about young people not liking KISS FM Breakfast because they didn't stop liking it.

Why do young people not listen to radio? 

Young people don't listen to radio because we have other devices to do other things instead of listening to the radio. What young people have is phones, tablets, laptops and computers.


3) Based on the whole of your learner response and my comments, choose one of the below LRs that you need to do, going forward (there may be more than one but please copy down just one to focus on for now):

LR2- Improve my use of media terminology so that I am using media specific words from the glossary and not just general words. 

In your own words, say HOW you are going to try and complete that learner response (e.g. read my glossary and make flash cards of key terms, go back over Glo Words in my book before the next assessment, summarise my CSPs in revision notes, complete my missing blog posts).

How I am going to achieve my LR is by revising my media GLOW words and by getting someone at home to help me test my knowledge on the GLOW words.

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